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北京领航名师肖克最后黄金押题作文
http://education.163.com 2006-01-10 11:31:38 来源: 北京领航学校 

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    大作文之一

图画描述了很多游人在游玩和照相,在天安门广场游玩时,在吐口香糖,乱扔废弃物,广场上充满了污渍

As is vividly depicted in the picture, thougsands of tourists strolled on the Tiananmen Square,busily taking photos and enjoed themselves freely.The most striking feature that impresses me deeply is that unbelievably, those people threw away the chewed gum and the smoked cigarette . Recently the phenomenon that the tourists destroyed the environment seriously has aroused great concern and should be given enough consideration. This phenomenon of destroying the environment should be condemned severely or made illegal. There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.

中间段落从两方面论证问题的危害,并举例论证,预测危害的趋势

To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon, several effects have been put forward. To begin with, destroying the environment not only results in the loss of sanitary maintainance but also does harm to the indignity of our national images internationally since Tiananmen Square as the most high-profile site represents the face-lift of China . In addition, some unhealthy or even poisonous wates will cause the peole to breathe the harmful air ,which is a threatening situation we are unwilling to see. No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below . According to a survey made by China Daily, 63.93% of young people who have once dropped wastes into the places of interests do take it seriously. If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of our heritage left by our ancesters.

最后一段要强调解决问题,谈的两点建议通常是提高人们的意识,加强执法

From what have been discussed above, it is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to prevent the tourist damaging the environment. On the one hand, we should be sensible to strengthen the enforcement of the laws to protect the cultural relics. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to keep people aware of the importance of saving the relcs out of the evil hands of destructioin. However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you attention to it can you see a colorful and harmonious future better sooner or later.

大作文之二

Good neighbours 图画描述了两个邻居个领着一只狗,狗在互相打招呼,而人却很冷漠

As is vividly depicted in the picture, the two lonely neighbors seem to ignore each other while the two dogs greet each others politely and amiably.The most striking feature that impresses me deeply is that unbelievably, the social interactions have been diminishing. Recently the phenomenon that lots of people loveto raise the dogs while neglecting the communications between the neighbors or relatives has aroused great concern and should be given enough consideration. This phenomenon of ignoring the human communications should be condemned severely or made illegal. Pet-keeping is becoming an increasingly pervasive because a pet may be a companion for old people, a friend for young couples and a playing toy for children. Believe it or not, pets are such an inseparable part in their daily life that they devote lots of energy, time and money to taking care of the need of their loved animals.There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.

中间段落从两方面论证问题的危害,并举例论证,预测危害的趋势

To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon, several reasons have been put forward. To begin with, since most people have to live on an on-the-move lifestyle, they are denied to have opportunities to share their feelings with their friends and relatives. Whereas pets are good listeners.

They are so busily scheduled that they have no time even for a drink with some friends.In addition, While there are so many dishonesties going around, they must stay with a dog, which is likely to be faithful to them. Since a pet is loyal to his master and acts as the instructions of humans, a person has no need to get along with his neighbors who may have different opinions about his or her ideas,which is a threatening situation we are unwilling to see.No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below . According to a survey made by China Daily,63.93% of young people who have once dropped wastes into the places of interests do take it seriously. If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of our heritage left by our ancesters.

最后一段要强调解决问题,谈的两点建议通常是提高人们的意识,加强执法

From what have been discussed above, it is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to prevent the pets damaging the the relations between the neighbors. On the one hand, we should be sensible to strengthen the social contacts between neighbors. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to keep people aware of the importance of communications between people instead of staying with a dog alone. However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you attention to it can you see a colorful and harmonious future better sooner or later.

大作文之三

Team work 一个人盖楼房很辛苦, 很多人在一起建, 他们脸上有很多笑容。

As is vividly depicted in the picture,(描述图画). The most striking feature is(图画重点信息).There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.

As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that(重复上面的图画信息) profoundly indicates that team work is momentous (重要的) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds. Undoubtedly, it is team work that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty and discouragement , that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming success. Unless we cooperate sincerely, , we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated, only to be eliminated. No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. A person who is assigned various jobs along the production lines will make a mess just because no one can be proficient in all the things. Only by cooperating with other people can you put your capacities into full play and can you be the winner in the society.

From what have been discussed above, It admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to involve yourself into a team work. It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to make your team work more efficient. On the one hand, we should be sensible to be receptive to other people’s opinions and benefits. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to be active in taking a more tough job and always helpful and honest to other people. However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later.

大作文之四

对别人真诚,有礼貌,无私奉献,谦虚为人

Genuineness and cordiality are rewarding

As is vividly depicted in the picture, a young man with a suitcase under his arm is stretches his hand to greet himself reflected in the mirror. The most striking feature is his image in the mirror is smiling at him sincerely. There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.

As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that his smile can be reflected as tenderly as his real smile profoundly indicates that genuineness and cordiality are momentous (重要的) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds. It is corporation with the team with great zeal that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty and discouragement, that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming success. Unless we are genuine to others, we will not be acknowledged, appreciated and respected by the others No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. Many capable people who always care about his way of thinking will be living a dull, depressing life.Only by being genuine to others can they win other people’s trust and can they reward the support, sympathy .

From what have been discussed above, It admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to cooperate with others with great zeal It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to make it work. On the one hand, we should be sensible to encourage ourselves to imagine everyone to be our friends not enemies. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to examine our behaviors to make sure they will not hurt others. However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later.

大作文之五

写作题目与要求:

Study the following set of drawings carefully and write an essay in which you should

1) describe the set of drawings,

2) analyze the purpose of the painter and

3) state your position.

You should write about 160-200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20points)



参考范文:

As is vividly revealed in the series of drawings above, a man has to go to four hospitals to confirm his health condition due to the irresponsibility of medical units, which seems to be humorous and funny but is most thought-provoking on second thoughts.

The aim of the painter of the drawings can be briefed as follows. To begin with, the irresponsibility in some working units can no longer be ignored by us. Accidents of various kinds resulting from irresponsibility happen more frequently than ever before. Coal mine accidents and medical accidents reported by the media are the cases in point. In the international communication, our irresponsibility has spoiled the credibility and image of our country. Responsibility does means a lot to us. What’s more, the irresponsibility of some working units should be regarded as social malignant tumor. At present the grim status contradicts our efforts to build up a harmonious society. The irresponsibility spells us heavy physical and psychological burden. And most often, the people who are frequently mistreated with irresponsibility will develop deep hatred for our society. In one word, the irresponsibility must be removed because it hinders the progress of our society.

In my view, concrete and effective measures must be taken to get rid of the phenomenon of irresponsibility. On the one hand, laws and regulations must be established to stop the existing irresponsibility. On the other hand, the importance of responsibility should be widely spread to make every citizen honor the sense of responsibility. Only in this way can we live in a safe and harmonious society. (262 words)

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